Song? POem? watever la…
I dont know how it started,
But it left a puzzle when it ends,
Everytime I thought I have it,
It slip Out from my hand.
Now that i’m a bit overprotective,
What happened change my prospective,
The only thing i can do is to forgive,
but to forget i shall never be.
I dont blame you but myself,
for letting it happened once again,
though the ending is still the same,
once bitten twice i’m not ashame.
Everytime when i wanted to trust someone new,
it reminds me of wounds that have not healed,
Everytime I want to reached out,
the past reminds me how much i wanted to shout,
but silently only tears managed to sneak out,
this is something I shouldn’t be proud.
Please i beg you, dont treat me so good now,
only to know you’ll leave me tomorrow,
Dont ever raise my hope to high till i can touch the sky,
later to crash it on the ground,
then i’ll have to bent down low ,
pick up what you have left behind.
December 12th, 2005 at 8:42 am
actualy wat r u writing about?
izzit a person treat u so good and u dun get it?
confuse
December 13th, 2005 at 6:45 am
Wahseh. Poet-to-be.Ur poem rocks!!!! And anyway, I consider it a poem as long as it has words and lines,so don’t fret about the details. My poems never rhyme anyway.Hehe.Cheers.
December 13th, 2005 at 8:02 am
Alex,
read carefully between the line.. some how u’ll find the meaning 1 lar. Dunno how to explain to u..
Hey, thanks chea fann..actually is nothing compared to urs. Mine is written inpromptu. dunno got any mistake in it or not.. paiseh..
March 10th, 2007 at 9:19 pm
If meaning to da lines are concealed easily
It defeats the purpose, expression of da soul
Pieces of shattered feelings we ought to consume time, fix up and see
For if one look closely, one can warm up the heart’s so cold